Sunday, 26 January 2014

Feedback 2 - Mrs Fernandez

Joe, Reece, Gwen,

Well done, the blog is shaping up to be a record of level 4 aspects of planning; you have many creative ideas and Gwen / Joe in particular you are posting extra pieces of research to support these.  Your pitch was informative and showed that you had carried out extensive research into the genre to support your ideas.  There are details of your proposed concept that will need careful consideration still; the ambitious concept of the split personality will be a challenge to communicate in 2 minutes and you may find that you will need to scale back your narrative in some respects.  However, it is still a better position to be in than not enough ideas.  You have worked effectively as a group to carry out a recce which is clearly documented.  I'm glad to see that you have been considering lighting as this will be an issue for your idea.  You will also want to carefully plan the set design to ensure that there are no unwanted objects in frame as it is quite a busy location.

In order to secure a level 4, you should:
1. make sure that any changes / ideas on costume, lighting, location, framing or changes to storyboard are clearly documented on blog
2. upload audience research, findings and reflect on how this informed your concept
3. titles on animatic - I can see a preview of you testing the shot, but you need to do another draft of animatic with the title content, timing and positioning on frame marked out and where the film title will appear.
4. Reece - technical analysis
5. Pictures of actress in costume /  any key props that have been designed / set up of location


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