Sunday, 1 December 2013

Feedback 1 - Mrs Fernandez

Well done group 1 - so far this is shaping up to be level 4 planning.  Your concept development is very interesting and creative at this stage.  The preliminary task demonstrates very effective group filmming; although there are continuity errors, you can learn from that.  Plus, it was very original and entertaining!

Textual analysis is coming along - Gwen, yours is excellent, well presented and technical throughout.  Joe and Reece, you need to highlight key words, use stills to improve presentation.  Both of you need to revisit the representation/ideology section - what about age, gender?

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