Film analysis process - feedback
Joe
Excellent analysis on the second post; technical, well presented, perceptive analysis of narrative. You are engaging with macro issues, however to improve, give specific shot detail when discussing representation / ideological discourse to reinforce your observations. Excellent links to concept development at the end. This is A grade / L 4 planning.
However, you still need to go back and respond to my feedback 1 comments about the first post - please do this ASAP and email me to confirm.
Gwen
Excellent second analysis - an interesting text, well observed, strong technical observations - again a Level 4 / A grade planning process. To improve, spell check carefully and re-read the ideological discourse section; some of the phrasing could be improved.
Reece
Second analysis not uploaded. You still need to respond to the feedback 1 comment about improving the first analysis. Please do this ASAP and email me once corrected. Take care will meeting deadlines as time management is a key assessment criteria and continually missing deadlines for planning will mean that you can't access Level 4 for planning.
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